Researched Writing: Summarizing
and Paraphrasing
Michael Bertsch
Too many direct quotes make the reader think that the writer
doesn't really have anything to say, that the writer's assembling sort of a
patchwork quilt paper. There's no unity, the flow is interrupted, the point is
obscured by stylistic considerations. So I advise writers not to use too many direct quotes.
Kimberly Wise
Quoting is writing down someone's exact words. So that
usually comes easier. But summarizing and paraphrasing, that's a class in
itself, differentiating between those things. And usually, using some kind of…
whatever text I'm using for that class, showing examples of how you shrunk down
a whole page into a summary, for example.
Mike Rose
In summarizing, you have to make decisions about what you're
gonna put in and what you're gonna leave out. How do you make those decisions,
based on what criteria? How do you know those criteria are legitimate? What
gets silenced or lost as you make those decisions to leave things out? Once
you've decided what to put in, how are you going to organize those so they make
sense each with the other and it's not just a bushel basket full of stuff that
has no relation at all, each to the other? These are a series of very important
decisions that show that even an act that's seemingly as dry as summarizing is
as vital and alive and dynamic as any other kind of writing…writing or social
act.
Jim Esh
You know, with scientific writing, you don't…generally you
don't quote per se. What you really have done before you ever put word on paper
is you've read everything on the topic that other people have said and almost
never is there this whole big general consensus of opinion that everybody
agrees on. So you've read and you've analyzed and you've said OK, this is the
part of it that makes sense to me. And these five people… or these papers or
these things that I'm summarizing are the ones that I really think have the
kernel of truth that applies to my paper. So you are attributing things to
other people, but there's a whole process of analysis…you're not stealing it.
Thomas Hilgers
One of the big difficulties we have is bringing that to bear
on our own ideas, or making it part of my own argument. It's very easy to
underline or to highlight, which many students do, things that strike us as
important when we read. It's much more difficult to figure out how to carry
what's important in somebody else's ideas into my own ideas and to make them
work for me in my own argument.
Divakaruni
Your argument is the main thing in a research paper.
Everything else is what you're using to support your own argument. Don't forget
that your argument is always going to be the most important part of your
research paper. If you don't have that firm, and if you're not comfortable and
confident about that, no matter how much other stuff you're going to add in,
it's just not going to work, and it'll get lopsided. And of course we go
through exercises where we deal with bringing in an outside source and blending
it into the paper, using paraphrase, using summary, using all of these
different sources. And also, learning to give credit in the appropriate ways to
people that they are indebted to.
Joe Harris
As you do practice that kind of stuff, often one issue is,
how do you lead into a quotation? Do you say, "This author says, this author
argues," "If we look at author X," how do you introduce it and what do you say
after you quote that person? And when you start to ask those questions you're
beginning to talk about I think, more interesting intellectual issues, which is
how you actually handle not just the typing part of it, but the idea part of
it. But you handle the idea part of it by learning certain conventions.