Writing for an Essay Exam: Student
Writers
Beverly Moss
And if you've
got an essay exam, and you've got forty five minutes, what is it you need to do to, to…
I guess what is it that you need to do to show that you understand the
assignment, and that you can maybe apply concepts, but I think it really does
depend on what field it's in. But I think you have to say OK, I've got forty five
minutes, here are the important issues I must address. What's the best way to
organize them and to support them, and to keep thinking, OK, key issues, what's
my evidence, what do I want to conclude about them?
Kay Halasek
Because that situation is so antithetical
to everything that we teach students in first year writing courses. That
is that writing is a process, that you should do prewriting and work on
inventing ideas before you actually begin drafting, that once you draft you should revise a text. I mean, you can see that timed writing
situations are… simply don't work with our pedagogy. And what we're teaching
writing, and in fact, in our writing classes. And in fact, students who come
from our basic writing program at Ohio State, who have learned this and really internalized the writing process and worked diligently at
becoming students who invent, draft, and revise. Who come into their first
writing course in the first year program. They're
asked then to do a piece of timed writing. And they often don't do well.
Mike Rose
On the other hand, don't get so crazy about that clock that
you throw out the window all of the things you know about planning and thinking
ahead and trying to structure a decent essay. It is gonna be worth your while
to take a few minutes out of the beginning of your time, allotted time, to kind
of think through what you're gonna do. To take a few minutes, to calm down, to
take a deep breath, to plot out what you want to write about, to make a little
list, and then to go at it. Those are some of the things I tell students when
they have to confront these unusual and not very friendly writing situations.
Elaine Maimon
When I talk about helping students to survive the essay
exam, I want to make clear that I'm not talking about a formula for the essays.
That I'm talking about strategies. Here are some things that may be helpful to
you to try. We're not talking about a formula for the perfect essay exam
question. And what is really important for students is that they are able to
think strategically.
Moss
What is really important, and not only with essay exams, but
with helping students understand how to read writing assignments, is to teach
them to look for key word concepts. If a teacher says, describe the process, then we need to talk to students about what that means. That
doesn't mean, then, that you do an argumentative essay. That's not what the
teacher's looking for, that assignment's not calling for an argumentative
essay. It's asking you to go through the steps of how something happened. Now
the assignment may say describe the process and then analyze, well, those are
two different things that that assignment's asking for. They need to know what
it means to describe a process and what it means to do an analysis. Sometimes I
think people get caught not understanding the difference. And not understanding
those concepts. So you get the descriptive essay, when someone's asking
for an analysis.
Patricia Scully
I teach my students to, when they're faced with a timed
writing situation, there will typically be a prompt.
Annotate the prompt. Write on the prompt, you've got to underline the key
words. If it says "discuss" I want to see that little circle, that I'm going to
look at your rough draft to make sure you have circled discussed, if it says
"explained" you have circled explained and you know what those words mean. …
Other key phrases are "compare and contrast," "argue." The
prompt is always going to be your thesis statement. They have it for you. Don't
do too much work, do exactly what you're told to do.
Chitra Divakaruni
Tests are
generally asking you for information. They want to see if you know certain
kinds of information, they want to see if you can process and problem solve
certain kinds of issues and use information to do it, and they want to
understand that you can do it. And therefore you have to be clear, you have to
be organized, and you have to manage your time. And one of the things I teach
them to do is a brief three–minute outline that they will write before they
write their essay, in which they organized all their points, they put maybe a
couple of important examples under each point, and then they go for it.