Review Emily Lesk’s draft “All-Powerful Coke” again. Then look closely at her introduction. Peer reviewers of this draft offered these comments on her first sentence:

[Reviewer NL] The opening sentence is a good attention-getter.

[Reviewer BK] This sentence seems too abrupt.

How should Emily Lesk respond to comments from reviewers that give conflicting advice?

Reflect on an appropriate response to peer comments

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