Exercise 4.6 Evaluating paragraphs

EXERCISE 4.6

Choose two other paragraphs in Emily Lesk’s draft, and evaluate them using the Quick Help guidelines. Paste the paragraphs into the text box below and then write a brief analysis suggesting ways to improve the development or organization of these paragraphs.

Question

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Choose two other paragraphs in Emily Lesk’s draft, and evaluate them using the Quick Help guidelines. Paste the paragraphs into the text box below and then write a brief analysis suggesting ways to improve the development or organization of these paragraphs.