5g Revise.

• How does the draft accomplish its purpose?
• Does the title tell what the draft is about?
• Is the thesis clearly stated, and does it contain a topic and a comment?
• How does the introduction catch readers’ attention?
• Will the draft interest and appeal to its audience?
• How does the draft indicate your stance on the topic?
• What are the main points that illustrate or support the thesis? Are they clear? Do you need to add material to the points or add new points?
• Are the ideas presented in an order that will make sense to readers?
• Are the points clearly linked by logical transitions?
• Have you documented your research appropriately?
• How are visuals, media, and research sources (if any) integrated into your draft? Have you commented on their significance?
• How does the draft conclude? Is the conclusion memorable?