The Toulmin system. This simplified form of the Toulmin system (10d and 11f) can help you organize an argumentative essay:
The federal government should ban smoking.
The ban would be limited to public places.
Smoking causes serious diseases in smokers.
Nonsmokers are endangered by others’ smoke.
assumption | The Constitution was established to “promote the general welfare.” |
assumption | Citizens are entitled to protection from harmful actions by others. |
additional explanation | The United States is based on a political system that is supposed to serve the basic needs of its people, including their health. |
statistics | Cite the incidence of deaths attributed to secondhand smoke. |
facts | Cite lawsuits won against large tobacco companies, including one that awarded billions of dollars to states in reparation for smoking-related health care costs. |
facts | Cite bans on smoking already imposed on indoor public spaces in many cities. |
authority | Cite the surgeon general. |
counter-argument | Smokers have rights, too. |
response | The suggested ban applies only to public places; smokers are free to smoke in private. |