34c Revise shifts in point of view.

34c
Revise shifts in point of view.

Unnecessary shifts in point of view between first person (I or we), second person (you), and third person (he, she, it, one, or they), or between singular and plural subjects, can be very confusing to readers.

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Is the writer making a general statement or giving advice to someone? Revising the shift eliminates this confusion.