Chapter 336. Exercise APA 3-4

336.1 Section Title

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Exercise APA 3-4
Integrating sources in APA papers
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Read the following passage and the information about its source. Then decide whether each student sample uses the source correctly. If the student has made an error in using the source, click on Error; if the student has quoted correctly, click on OK.

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ORIGINAL SOURCE

Mental-health workers have long theorized that it takes grueling emotional exertion to recover from the death of a loved one. So-called grief work, now the stock-in-trade of a growing number of grief counselors, entails confronting the reality of a loved one’s demise and grappling with the harsh emotions triggered by that loss.

Two new studies, however, knock grief work off its theoretical pedestal. Among bereaved spouses tracked for up to 2 years after their partners’ death, those who often talked with others and briefly wrote in diaries about their emotions fared no better than their tight-lipped, unexpressive counterparts, according to psychologist Margaret Stroebe of Utrecht University in the Netherlands and her colleagues.

From Bower, B. (2002, March 2). Good grief: Bereaved adjust well without airing emotion. Science News, 161, 131-132.

[The source is from page 131.]

Question

Correct. This sentence is unacceptable. Although the student has cited the author, date, and page number for the source, the student has used the exact words of the source without enclosing them in quotation marks. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is unacceptable. Although the student has cited the author, date, and page number for the source, the student has used the exact words of the source without enclosing them in quotation marks. For more help, see section APA-3.
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Question

Correct. This sentence is acceptable. The student has placed borrowed language in quotation marks and has cited the source correctly using APA style. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is acceptable. The student has placed borrowed language in quotation marks and has cited the source correctly using APA style. For more help, see section APA-3.
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Question

Correct. This sentence is acceptable. The student has put the source’s exact words in quotation marks and has used the ellipsis mark to indicate that some words from the source have been omitted. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is acceptable. The student has put the source’s exact words in quotation marks and has used the ellipsis mark to indicate that some words from the source have been omitted. For more help, see section APA-3.
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Correct. This sentence is unacceptable. The quotation is not word-for-word accurate from the source: The student has changed have long theorized to have always believed and the death of a loved one to a loved one’s death. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is unacceptable. The quotation is not word-for-word accurate from the source: The student has changed have long theorized to have always believed and the death of a loved one to a loved one’s death. For more help, see section APA-3.
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Correct. This passage is unacceptable. The student has dropped the quotation into the text without using a signal phrase naming the author. The following is an acceptable revision:
Mental health professionals have assumed that people stricken by grief need a great deal of help. Bower (2003) pointed out that “so-called grief work, now the stock-in-trade of a growing number of grief counselors, entails confronting the reality of a loved one’s demise and grappling with the harsh emotions triggered by that loss” (p. 131).
Note that it is acceptable to change the capital S to lowercase at the beginning of the quotation to fit the grammar of the student’s sentence.
For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This passage is unacceptable. The student has dropped the quotation into the text without using a signal phrase naming the author. The following is an acceptable revision:
Mental health professionals have assumed that people stricken by grief need a great deal of help. Bower (2003) pointed out that “so-called grief work, now the stock-in-trade of a growing number of grief counselors, entails confronting the reality of a loved one’s demise and grappling with the harsh emotions triggered by that loss” (p. 131).
Note that it is acceptable to change the capital S to lowercase at the beginning of the quotation to fit the grammar of the student’s sentence.
For more help, see section APA-3.
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Question

Correct. This sentence is acceptable. The student has introduced the quotation with a signal phrase naming the author and giving the date in parentheses and has placed the exact words from the source in quotation marks. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is acceptable. The student has introduced the quotation with a signal phrase naming the author and giving the date in parentheses and has placed the exact words from the source in quotation marks. For more help, see section APA-3.
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Correct. This sentence is acceptable. The student has enclosed language from the source in quotation marks and has used brackets to indicate that words from the source have been changed to fit the grammar of the student’s sentence (confronting changed to confront, grappling changed to grapple). For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is acceptable. The student has enclosed language from the source in quotation marks and has used brackets to indicate that words from the source have been changed to fit the grammar of the student’s sentence (confronting changed to confront, grappling changed to grapple). For more help, see section APA-3.
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Correct. This sentence is unacceptable. In APA style, the verb in a signal phrase should be in the past tense or the present perfect tense (found or have found), not the present tense (find). For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is unacceptable. In APA style, the verb in a signal phrase should be in the past tense or the present perfect tense (found or have found), not the present tense (find). For more help, see section APA-3.
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Correct. This passage is unacceptable. Although the student has used a correct APA-style signal phrase and has put the page number in parentheses following the quotation, the student should not have used quotation marks to enclose a long quotation that is set off from the text by indenting. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This passage is unacceptable. Although the student has used a correct APA-style signal phrase and has put the page number in parentheses following the quotation, the student should not have used quotation marks to enclose a long quotation is set off from the text by indenting. For more help, see section APA-3.
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Correct. This sentence is acceptable. The student has enclosed borrowed language in quotation marks and has used an ellipsis mark to indicate that the word however has been omitted from the source. The student also has used a proper APA signal phrase and parenthetical citation. For more help, see section APA-3.
Sorry. This sentence is acceptable. The student has enclosed borrowed language in quotation marks and has used an ellipsis mark to indicate that the word however has been omitted from the source. The student also has used a proper APA signal phrase and parenthetical citation. For more help, see section APA-3.
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