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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise G6-8
Revising run-on sentences
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Revise each run-on sentence using the method of revision suggested in brackets. Answers may vary. Type your answers in the boxes below.

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Example

1 of 10

My sister Elaine was awarded the Medal of Honor, however, she was not able to attend the awards ceremony. [Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: My sister Elaine was awarded the Medal of Honor, but she was not able to attend the awards ceremony. For more help, see section G6.

2 of 10

When the professor asked why the suffix -gate is sometimes added to a word to denote a political scandal, none of the students knew why, it was the first they had heard of Watergate. [Use a semicolon.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: When the professor asked why the suffix -gate is sometimes added to a word to denote a political scandal, none of the students knew why; it was the first they had heard of Watergate. For more help, see section G6.

3 of 10

Medical students do not have much social life, their course work is very demanding. [Restructure the sentence by subordinating the second clause.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Medical students do not have much social life because their course work is very demanding. For more help, see section G6.

4 of 10

Albert Einstein’s mother insisted that her son take violin lessons as a child, Einstein himself didn’t like the lessons, but he did enjoy listening to Mozart’s violin sonatas later in life. [Make two sentences.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Albert Einstein’s mother insisted that her son take violin lessons as a child. Einstein himself didn’t like the lessons, but he did enjoy listening to Mozart’s violin sonatas later in life. For more help, see section G6.

5 of 10

Travertine is a type of pitted stone commonly used as a building material, it is imported to the United States from Mexico, Peru, Italy, and Turkey. [Restructure the sentence by using a subordinate phrase or clause.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Travertine, a type of pitted stone commonly used as a building material, is imported to the United States from Mexico, Peru, Italy, and Turkey. For more help, see section G6.

6 of 10

We all make mistakes no one is perfect. [Use a semicolon.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: We all make mistakes; no one is perfect. For more help, see section G6.

7 of 10

Hitler’s forces invaded Poland, then the leaders of Britain and France declared war on Germany. [Restructure the sentence by subordinating the first clause.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: After Hitler’s forces invaded Poland, the leaders of Britain and France declared war on Germany. For more help, see section G6.

8 of 10

Most parents want their children to do well in school, however, they don’t always know how to help them succeed. [Restructure the sentence by subordinating the first clause.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Although most parents want their children to do well in school, they don’t always know how to help them succeed. For more help, see section G6.

9 of 10

When a pope dies or retires, cardinals from around the world gather in Rome to elect a new pope, he will serve as the leader of the Roman Catholic Church. [Restructure the sentence by subordinating the second independent clause.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: When a pope dies or retires, cardinals from around the world gather in Rome to elect a new pope, who will serve as the leader of the Roman Catholic Church. For more help, see section G6.

10 of 10

Ned Kelly was an infamous outlaw and convicted murderer in nineteenth-century Australia, several months before his execution Kelly wrote a letter to Parliament in which he admitted killing a police officer, but he claimed that he had acted in self-defense. [Make two sentences.]

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Ned Kelly was an infamous outlaw and convicted murderer in nineteenth-century Australia. Several months before his execution, Kelly wrote a letter to Parliament in which he admitted killing a police officer, but he claimed that he had acted in self-defense. For more help, see section G6.