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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise G6-2
Run-on sentences
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Revise any run-on sentences using a technique that you find effective. If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. Type your answers in the boxes below.
Click Submit after each question to see feedback and to record your answer. After you have finished every question, your answers will be submitted to your instructor’s gradebook. You may review your answers by returning to the exercise at any time. (An exercise reports to the gradebook only if your instructor has assigned it.)
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Wind power for the home is a supplementary source of energy, it can be combined with electricity, gas, or solar energy.
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Suggested revision: Wind power for the home is a supplementary source of energy that can be combined with electricity, gas, or solar energy.
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Aidan viewed Sofia Coppola’s Lost in Translation three times and then wrote a paper describing the film as the work of a mysterious modern painter.
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Suggested revision: Correct
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In the Middle Ages, the streets of London were dangerous places, it was safer to travel by boat along the Thames.
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Suggested revision: In the Middle Ages, when the streets of London were dangerous places, it was safer to travel by boat along the Thames.
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“He’s not drunk,” I said, “he’s in a state of diabetic shock.”
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Suggested revision: “He’s not drunk,” I said. “He’s in a state of diabetic shock.”
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Are you able to endure extreme angle turns, high speeds, frequent jumps, and occasional crashes, then supermoto racing may be a sport for you.
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Suggested revision: Are you able to endure extreme angle turns, high speeds, frequent jumps, and occasional crashes? Then supermoto racing may be a sport for you.