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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise W4–6
Editing for sexist language
The following paragraph is a job posting for an elementary school teacher. In the box, retype the paragraph, revising to eliminate sexist language or sexist assumptions.
Click Submit after you are finished to record your answers in your instructor's gradebook. You may review your answers by returning to the exercise at any time. (An exercise reports to the gradebook only if your instructor has assigned it.)
Question
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Suggested revision:
We are looking for qualified candidates for the position of elementary school teacher. The ideal candidate should have a bachelor’s degree, a state teaching certificate, and one year of student teaching. Candidates should be knowledgeable in all elementary subject areas. We want our new teacher to have a commanding presence in the classroom as well as a patient and trustworthy demeanor. The teacher must be able to both motivate an entire classroom and work with students one-on-one to assess their individual needs. The teacher must also be comfortable communicating with the students’ parents. For salary and benefits information, please contact the Martin County School Board. Qualified applicants should submit their résumés by March 15.