Chapter 9. EXERCISE S6-2

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Using coordination and subordination
EXERCISE S6-2
Purpose and audience

Combine the following sentences by subordinating minor ideas or by coordinating ideas of equal importance. You must decide which ideas are minor because the sentences are given out of context. Type your answers in the boxes below.

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Suggested revision: The X-Men comic books and Japanese woodcuts of kabuki dancers, all part of Marlena’s research project on popular culture, covered the tabletop and the chairs.

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Suggested revision: Our waitress, costumed in a kimono, had painted her face white and arranged her hair in a lacquered beehive.

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Suggested revision: Students can apply for a spot in the leadership program, which teaches thinking and communication skills.

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Suggested revision: Shore houses were flooded up to the first floor, beaches were washed away, and Brant’s Lighthouse was swallowed by the sea.

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Suggested revision: Laura Thackray, an engineer at Volvo Car Corporation, addressed women’s safety needs by designing a pregnant crash-test dummy.