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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise S1-6
Correcting faulty parallelism
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Edit each sentence to correct faulty parallelism. Answers may vary.

Click Submit after each question to see feedback and to record your answer. After you have finished every question, your answers will be submitted to your instructor’s gradebook. You may review your answers by returning to the exercise at any time. (An exercise reports to the gradebook only if your instructor has assigned it.)

Example

1 of 10

I quit Weight Watchers not because I didn’t want to continue but my friend stopped going with me.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: I quit Weight Watchers not because I didn’t want to continue but because my friend stopped going with me.
For more help, see section S1

2 of 10

Yoga requires you to stretch muscles slowly, breathe regularly, and you hold each position.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Yoga requires you to stretch muscles slowly, breathe regularly, and hold each position.
For more help, see section S1.

3 of 10

People suffering from diabetes may notice one or more of the following symptoms: blurred vision, itching, weight loss, and they are thirsty.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: People suffering from diabetes may notice one or more of the following symptoms: blurred vision, itching, weight loss, and thirst.
For more help, see section S1.

4 of 10

The babysitter was expected to feed two children, entertain them, take phone messages, and cleaning the kitchen.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: The babysitter was expected to feed two children, entertain them, take phone messages, and clean the kitchen.
For more help, see section S1.

5 of 10

In a week of lessons, Sally taught us not only how to breathe and float but also to do the elementary backstroke, the crawl, and the dog paddle.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: In a week of lessons, Sally taught us not only how to breathe and float but also how to do the elementary backstroke, the crawl, and the dog paddle.
For more help, see section S1.

6 of 10

Either the directions for assembling the desk had been translated from another language or written by someone who wanted to make me suffer.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Either the directions for assembling the desk had been translated from another language or they were written by someone who wanted to make me suffer.
For more help, see section S1.

7 of 10

Sue and Terry are completing their math homework, Tom is giving Jim directions to his apartment, Steve is catching up on some sleep, and the rest of the students can be seen daydreaming.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Sue and Terry are completing their math homework, Tom is giving Jim directions to his apartment, Steve is catching up on some sleep, and the rest of the students are daydreaming.
For more help, see section S1.

8 of 10

Save your work frequently and you should print out hard copies to protect yourself against computer crashes.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Save your work frequently and print out hard copies to protect yourself against computer crashes.
For more help, see section S1.

9 of 10

The triathlete practiced swimming, bicycling, and she prepared to run a marathon.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: The triathlete practiced swimming, bicycling, and running a marathon.
For more help, see section S1.

10 of 10

The smoke blowing up from the valley to the hillside was alarming to both the local residents and to the tourists.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: The smoke blowing up from the valley to the hillside was alarming to both the local residents and the tourists.
For more help, see section S1.