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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise S3-5
Misplaced modifiers
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Edit each sentence to correct any misplaced modifiers. Answers may vary.

Click Submit after each question to see feedback and to record your answer. After you have finished every question, your answers will be submitted to your instructor’s gradebook. You may review your answers by returning to the exercise at any time. (An exercise reports to the gradebook only if your instructor has assigned it.)

Example

1 of 10

The architect will design a library for the professor using environmentally friendly materials.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Using environmentally friendly materials, the architect will design a library for the professor.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

2 of 10

The tycoon owned newspapers that made him the ruler of governments in his own mind.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: The tycoon owned newspapers that in his own mind made him the ruler of governments.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

3 of 10

Every question doesn’t deserve an answer.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Not every question deserves an answer.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

4 of 10

The aging pitcher had finally, after four surgeries and a painful knee injury at the end of the season, decided to retire.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: After four surgeries and a painful knee injury at the end of the season, the aging pitcher had finally decided to retire.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

5 of 10

The police only apprehended one of the suspects.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: The police apprehended only one of the suspects.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

6 of 10

The Secret Service was falsely accused of mishandling the attempted assassination by the media.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: The Secret Service was falsely accused by the media of mishandling the attempted assassination.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

7 of 10

All frozen desserts are not fattening.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Not all frozen desserts are fattening.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

8 of 10

Mountain goats have to nimbly and quickly cover treacherous terrain.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Mountain goats have to cover treacherous terrain nimbly and quickly.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

9 of 10

The mayor promised to get tough on crime on the steps of City Hall.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: On the steps of City Hall, the mayor promised to get tough on crime.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.

10 of 10

Natalie caught up to the bus running at full speed.

Possible revision:
Suggested revision: Running at full speed, Natalie caught up to the bus.
For more help, see sections S3-a to S3-d.