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Exercise S6-7
Using subordination
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The following sentences show coordinated ideas (ideas joined with a coordinating conjunction or a semicolon). Restructure the sentences by subordinating minor ideas. You must decide which ideas are minor because the sentences are given out of context. Type your answers in the boxes below.
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Suggested revision: Because students, textile workers, and labor unions have loudly protested sweatshop abuses, apparel makers have been forced to examine their labor practices.
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Suggested revision: The cafeteria’s new menu, which has an international flavor, includes everything from enchiladas and pizza to pad thai and sauerbraten.