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Exercise S6-9
Using coordination and subordination
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In each of the following sentences, the idea that the writer wished to emphasize is buried in a subordinate construction. Restructure each sentence so that the independent clause expresses the major idea, as indicated in brackets, and lesser ideas are subordinated. Type your answers in the boxes below.
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Suggested revision: Working as an aide for the relief agency, Gina distributed food and medical supplies.
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Suggested revision: Janbir, who spent every Saturday learning tabla drumming, noticed with each hour of practice that his memory for complex patterns was growing stronger.
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Suggested revision: When the rotor hit, it gouged a hole about an eighth of an inch deep in my helmet.
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Suggested revision: My grandfather, who was born eighty years ago in Puerto Rico, raised his daughters the old-fashioned way.
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Suggested revision: By reversing the depressive effect of the drug, the Narcan saved the patient’s life.