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You must read each slide, and complete any questions on the slide, in sequence.
Exercise W2-1
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Edit the following sentences to reduce wordiness. Type your answers in the boxes below.
Click Submit after each question to see feedback and to record your answer. After you have finished every question, your answers will be submitted to your instructor’s gradebook. You may review your answers by returning to the exercise at any time. (An exercise reports to the gradebook only if your instructor has assigned it.)
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Suggested revision: Martin Luther King Jr. set a high standard for future leaders.
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Suggested revision: Alice has loved cooking since she could first peek over a kitchen tabletop.
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Suggested revision: Bloom’s race for the governorship is futile.
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Suggested revision: A successful graphic designer must have technical knowledge and an eye for color and balance.
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Suggested revision: You will deliver mail to all employees.