Chapter 74. Exercise W3-6

74.1 Section Title

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Active and passive voice
EXERCISE W3-6
Using active verbs
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The sentences in this exercise are all taken from one paragraph about an incident with a Russian submarine. The following is the first sentence in the paragraph, written in the active voice: "In August 2000, Russian submarines performed maneuvers above the Arctic Circle." Correct the other sentences, below, to make them more emphatic and vigorous. (Although passive-voice sentences and be verbs can be effective, in the examples in this exercise they don’t work as well as active alternatives.) Answers may vary.

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Suggested revision: Nearby American submarines watched the Russians’ routine exercises.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: Suddenly, a pair of explosions startled the American submarine crews.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: Nuclear reactors power many naval submarines.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: The explosions sank the Russian nuclear submarine Kursk.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: Russian and American officials disagreed about the cause of the accident.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: The Russian navy did not ask the United States for help with the rescue operation.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: Meanwhile, the families of the Kursk’s 118 crew members demanded information about the rescue operation.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: Russian leaders finally allowed Norwegian rescue divers to look for possible survivors.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: When it became clear that everyone on board the Kursk must have drowned, the Norwegian divers ended their efforts.
For more help, see section W3.

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Suggested revision: The submarine’s tragic story saddened people around the world.
For more help, see section W3.