Conclusion: Research paper

Annotated paragraph: With continuing advances in technology, protecting both employers and employees will require greater awareness of these programs, better disclosure to employees, and a more public discussion about what types of protection are necessary to guard individual freedoms in the wired workplace. —Anna Orlov, student. The paragraph inlcudes the following annotations to demonstrate why the conclusion is effective: Sums up discussion in paper and suggests solution. The three-part parallel structure ("greater awareness, better disclosure, more public discussion") leads to an emphatic final phrase ("to guard individual freedoms in the wired workplace").

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