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As you write: Revising paragraphs

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Exchange drafts with a classmate and provide feedback for revising paragraphs. Use the following checklist to help each other develop effective paragraphs:

Is the introductory paragraph engaging and interesting?
Is each paragraph unified around a main point and does it contain a clear topic sentence?
Is each paragraph sufficiently developed?
Is each paragraph the right length? Do any paragraphs need to be divided for easier reading?
Is the final paragraph an effective conclusion?

Question

Using your classmate’s feedback, use the box below to revise a few paragraphs or to make notes about how you might revise a few paragraphs.