Example of sentence-level editing

Draft with revisions:  Sentence-level revisions. A sample paper with annotations on individual words, phrases, punctuating, and formatting throughout.  Examples include: 1.  the original title of the paper, big Box Stores Aren’t So Bad has been crossed out and replaced by "Rethinking Big-Box Stores." 2.  A quoted title has an annotation to remove italics and insert quotation marks instead 3.  "She claims…" has been altered to read "She argues..."“,”is that enough?

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Revising

Editing sentences and paragraphs