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Although some cities have found creative ways to improve access to public transportation for physically handicapped passengers, our city has struggled with budget constraints and competing priorities. The budget crunch has led citizens to question how funds are distributed. For example, last year city officials voted to use available funds to support after-school programs rather than transportation upgrades. It is not clear to some citizens why after-school programs are more important.

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