Example of sentence-level revisions

Draft with revisions: Sentence-level revisions. A sample paper with annotations on individual words, phrases, punctuating, and formatting throughout. Examples include: 1. the original title of the paper, big Box Stores Aren’t So Bad has been crossed out and replaced by "Rethinking Big-Box Stores." 2. A quoted title has an annotation to remove italics and insert quotation marks instead 3. "She claims…" has been altered to read "She argues..."“,”is that enough?