Thesis at beginning of introduction

Annotated paragraph. Thesis at the beginning of an introduction. Paragraph reads: Flextime scheduling, which has proved its effectiveness at the Library of Congress, should be introduced on a trial basis at the main branch of the Montgomery County Public Library. By offering flexible work hours, the library can boost employee morale, cut down on absenteeism, and expand its hours of operation. Annotations: The writer states the thesis as a recommendation. The writer has set up a three-part argument for offering flexible working hours as a blueprint: boost employee morale, cut down on absenteeism, expand hours of operation Excerpt provided by David Warren, student

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