Sentence variety 2

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In the box below, edit the following paragraph to improve sentence variety.

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There is a movement in the United States that is gaining popularity. It is the tiny house movement. The average tiny house is no more than about four hundred square feet. Tiny houses allow people to simplify their lives and reduce clutter by eliminating possessions that are unnecessary. People who live in tiny houses also have more free time because they save time on cleaning and maintenance. Furthermore, tiny houses are less expensive than traditional homes and more earth-friendly. However, there are disadvantages to tiny houses. More than one person may live in a tiny house, so getting along can be challenging. A pet further complicates living in cramped quarters. Finally, residents of tiny houses cannot easily entertain friends or accommodate out-of-town guests. There are many good reasons to live in a tiny house. There are also substantial disadvantages. Those who are considering life in a tiny home should explore all pros and cons carefully.

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Possible revision: The tiny house movement is gaining popularity in the United States. With an average size of no more than four hundred square feet, tiny houses allow people to simplify their lives and reduce clutter by eliminating unnecessary possessions. Because they save time on cleaning and maintenance, people who live in tiny houses also have more free time. Tiny houses, furthermore, are less expensive than traditional homes and more earth-friendly. But tiny houses have disadvantages. If more than one person lives in a tiny house, getting along can be challenging. Having a pet further complicates living in cramped quarters. Finally, entertaining friends or accommodating out-of-town guests is not easy. While there are many good reasons to live in a tiny house, the disadvantages are substantial, so those considering life in a tiny home should carefully explore all pros and cons.
In the box below, edit the following paragraph to improve sentence variety. (See exercise for original source.)