Mechanics

ital ITALICS

Although italics are generally preferred, you may use underlining in place of italics. Whichever method you choose, be consistent throughout your document. Italics (or underlining) are used in the following instances:

  1. Use italics for words used as words.

    In this report, the word operator will refer to any individual who is in charge of the equipment, regardless of that individual’s certification.

  2. Use italics to indicate titles of long works (books, manuals, and so on), periodicals and newspapers, long films, long plays, and long musical works.

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    See Houghton’s Civil Engineering Today.

    We subscribe to the Wall Street Journal.

    Note that the is not italicized or capitalized when the title is used in a sentence.

    NOTE: The MLA style guide recommends that the names of websites be italicized.

    The Library of Congress maintains Thomas, an excellent site for legislative information.

  3. Use italics to indicate the names of ships, trains, and airplanes.

    The shipment is expected to arrive next week on the Penguin.

  4. Use italics to set off foreign expressions that have not become fully assimilated into English.

    Grace’s joie de vivre makes her an engaging presenter.

    The replacement part came from one of the marchés aux puces in Paris.

    Check a dictionary to determine whether a foreign expression has become assimilated.

  5. Use italics to emphasize words or phrases.

    Do not press the red button.

< > ANGLE BRACKETS

Some style guides advocate using angle brackets around URLs in print documents to set them off from the text.

Our survey included a close look at three online news sites: the New York Times <www.nytimes.com >, the Washington Post <www.washingtonpost.com >, and CNN <www.cnn.com >.

You might want to check with your instructor or organization before following this recommendation.

- HYPHENS

Hyphens are used in the following instances:

  1. Use hyphens to form compound adjectives that precede nouns.

    general-purpose register

    meat-eating dinosaur

    chain-driven saw

    NOTE: Hyphens are not used after adverbs that end in -ly.

    newly acquired terminal

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    For more about compound adjectives, see “Writing Grammatically Correct Sentences” in Ch. 6.

    Also note that hyphens are not used when the compound adjective follows the noun:

    The Woodchuck saw is chain driven.

    Many organizations have their own policy about hyphenating compound adjectives. Check to see if your organization has a policy.

  2. Use hyphens to form some compound nouns.

    once-over

    go-between

    NOTE: There is a trend away from hyphenating compound nouns (vice president, photomicroscope, drawbridge); check your dictionary for proper spelling.

  3. Use hyphens to form fractions and compound numbers.

    one-half

    fifty-six

  4. Use hyphens to attach some prefixes and suffixes.

    post-1945

    president-elect

  5. Use hyphens to divide a word at the end of a line.

    We will meet in the pavil-

    ion in one hour.

    Whenever possible, however, avoid such line breaks; they slow the reader down. Even when your word processor is determining the line breaks, you might have to check the dictionary occasionally to make sure a word has been divided between syllables. If you need to break a URL at the end of a line, do not add a hyphen. Instead, break the URL before a single slash or before a period:

    http://www.stc.org

    /ethical.asp

num NUMBERS

Ways of handling numbers vary considerably. Therefore, in choosing between words and numerals, consult your organization’s style guide. Many organizations observe the following guidelines:

  1. Express technical quantities of any size in numerals, especially if a unit of measurement is included.

    3 feet 43,219 square miles
    12 grams 36 hectares

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  2. Express nontechnical quantities of fewer than 10 in words.

    three persons

    six whales

  3. Express nontechnical quantities of 10 or more in numerals.

    300 persons

    12 whales

  4. Write out approximations.

    approximately ten thousand people

    about two million trees

  5. Express round numbers over nine million in a combination of words and numerals.

    14 million light-years

    $64 billion

  6. Express decimals in numerals.

    3.14

    1,013.065

    Decimals of less than one are preceded by a zero:

    0.146

    0.006

  7. Write out fractions, unless they are linked to units of measurement.

    two-thirds of the members

    3½ hp

  8. Express time of day in numerals if A.M. or P.M. is used; otherwise, write it out.

    6:10 A.M.

    six o’clock

    the nine-thirty train

  9. Express page numbers and figure and table numbers in numerals.

    Figure 1

    Table 13

    page 261

  10. Write back-to-back numbers using a combination of words and ­numerals.

    six 3-inch screws

    fourteen 12-foot ladders

    500

    3,012 five-piece starter units

    In general, the quantity linked to a unit of measurement should be expressed with the numeral. If the nontechnical quantity would be cumbersome in words, however, use the numeral for it instead.

  11. Use both words and numerals to represent numbers in legal contracts or in documents intended for international readers.

    thirty-seven thousand dollars ($37,000)

    five (5) relays

  12. Use both words and numerals in some street addresses.

    3801 Fifteenth Street

SPECIAL CASES

abbr ABBREVIATIONS

Abbreviations save time and space, but you should use them carefully because your readers might not understand them. Many companies and professional organizations provide lists of approved abbreviations.

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Analyze your audience to determine whether and how to abbreviate. If your readers include a general audience unfamiliar with your field, either write out the technical terms or attach a list of abbreviations. If you are new to an organization or are publishing in a field for the first time, find out which abbreviations are commonly used. If for any reason you are unsure about a term, write it out.

The following are general guidelines about abbreviations:

  1. When an unfamiliar abbreviation is introduced for the first time, give the full term, followed by the abbreviation in parentheses. In subsequent references, the abbreviation may be used alone. For long works, the full term and its abbreviation may be written out at the start of major units, such as chapters.

    The heart of the new system is the self-loading cartridge (SLC).

    The liquid crystal display (LCD) is your control center.

  2. To form the plural of an abbreviation, add an s, either with or without an apostrophe, depending on the style used by your organization.

    GNP’s or GNPs

    PhD’s or PhDs

    Abbreviations for most units of measurement do not take plurals:

    10 in.

    3 qt

  3. Do not use periods with most abbreviations in scientific writing.

    lb

    cos

    dc

    If an abbreviation can be confused with another word, however, a period should be used:

    in.

    Fig.

  4. If no number is used with a unit of measurement, do not use an ­abbreviation.

    INCORRECT How many sq meters is the site?
    CORRECT How many square meters is the site?

cap CAPITALIZATION

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For the most part, the conventions of capitalization in general writing apply in technical communication:

  1. Capitalize proper nouns, titles, trade names, places, languages, religions, and organizations.

    William Rusham

    Director of Personnel

    Quick-Fix Erasers

    Bethesda, Maryland

    Italian

    Methodism

    Society for Technical Communication

    In some organizations, job titles are not capitalized unless they refer to specific people.

    Alfred Loggins, Director of Personnel, is interested in being considered for vice president of marketing.

  2. Capitalize headings and labels.

    A Proposal To Implement the Wilkins Conversion System

    Mitosis

    Table 3

    Section One

    The Problem

    Rate of Inflation, 2006–2016

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