EXERCISE 6.13

13. Refer to the advice in “Use Modifiers Effectively” under “Structuring Effective Sentences,” and revise the following sentences to correct punctuation or pronoun errors related to modifiers.

  1. Press the Greeting Record button to record the greeting that is stored on a microchip inside the machine.

  2. This problem that has been traced to manufacturing delays, has resulted in our losing four major contracts.