Moving from Research Question to Working Thesis

For more on stating and using a thesis, see Shaping Your Topic for Your Purpose and Your Audience in Ch. 20.

Some writers find a project easier to tackle if they have in mind not only a question but also a possible answer, maybe even a working thesis. However, be flexible, ready to change either your possible answer or your question as your research progresses.

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Take Action Focusing a Research Question

Ask each question listed in the left-hand column to consider whether your research question needs improvement. If so, follow the ASK—LOCATE SPECIFICS—TAKE ACTION sequence to revise.

1 ASK 2 LOCATE SPECIFICS 3 TAKE ACTION
Does my question focus on a topic that could be more interesting to me or my readers?
  • A topic has been overdone if average readers are very familiar with it.

  • A topic is too specific if sources are difficult to uncover.

  • A topic is too bland or narrow if it would not engage a broad audience.

  • Read current news and blogs to find new ideas, or adjust your focus on an older topic to give it a fresh approach.

  • Broaden very narrow topics so they have more significance to a wider audience and so that sources are readily available to you.

TOO NARROW: How did John F. Kennedy’s maternal grandfather influence the decisions JFK made during his first month in office?

BROADER: How did John F. Kennedy’s family influence his handling of the Cuban missile crisis?

Does my question address a debatable issue? Does it allow for a range of opposing viewpoints? Will I be able to support my own view rather than explain what’s generally known and accepted?
  • Check for factual questions. If your question can be answered by a simple yes or no or with a few statistics, it is not debatable.

  • Consider your own view. Rather than simply explaining what’s generally known and accepted, you should be prepared to state an opinion and provide support for that point of view.

  • As a starting point, search “pro–con” or “debate” Web sites to discover current issues that people disagree on.

  • Read about local issues affecting your community that people may have conflicting views on.

TOO FACTUAL: Are there more African American students or white students in the entering class this year?

MORE DEBATABLE: How does the racial or ethnic diversity of students affect campus relations at our school?

Is my question narrow enough for a productive investigation in the allotted time frame?
  • Consider how you might answer your question. If the resulting paper would take more time or pages than allotted, it is probably too broad.

  • Conduct a search based on your question. If a wide range of subtopics appear in your search results, or if many full-length books appear to address your question, the topic is probably too broad for a college research assignment.

  • Search for more specific aspects of the topic. Try to address a smaller component of the issue, such as a shorter time span or a smaller geographical area, to make it more manageable.

  • Ask an instructor, a peer, or a writing center tutor for input. It may be difficult to assess your own ideas. The input of others can help you find ways to bring your question into focus.

TOO BROAD: How is the climate of the earth changing?

NARROWER: How will El Niño affect the climate in California during the next decade?

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RESEARCH QUESTION How does a nutritious lunch benefit students?
WORKING THESIS Nutritious school lunches can improve students’ classroom performance.

Using Your Working Thesis to Guide Your Research

You probably will revise or replace your working thesis before you finish, but it can guide you now.

This early exploration will help you pursue the sources and information you need but avoid any wild-goose chase that might distract you.

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Surveying Your Resources

For Internet and library search strategies, see Ch. 31.

For advice on creating a working bibliography, see Starting a Working Bibliography in Ch. 33.

Conduct a quick online search of your library to test whether your question is likely to lead to an ample research paper. You’ll need enough ideas, opinions, facts, statistics, and expert testimony to address your question. If you turn up a skimpy list, change search terms. If your search results in hundreds of sources, refine your question. Aim for a question that is the focus of from twelve to twenty available sources. If you need help, talk to a reference librarian.

Also decide which types of sources to target. Some questions require a wide range and others a narrower range restricted by date or discipline. The list below describes a number of source types you can investigate.

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