EXERCISE 22-1 Choosing an Appropriate Tone and Level of Formality
Revise the following passages to ensure that both the tone and the level of formality are appropriate for the topic and audience. Example:
I’m sending you this letter because I want you to meet with me and give me some info about the job you do.
I am writing to inquire about the possibility of an informational interview about your profession.
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