EXERCISE 17–2 Jargon
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Dear Ms. Jackson:
We members of the Nakamura Reyes team value our external partnering arrangements with Creative Software, and I look forward to seeing you next week at the trade show in Fresno. Per Mr. Reyes, please let me know when you’ll have some downtime there so that he and I can conduct a strategizing session with you concerning our production schedule. It’s crucial that we all be on the same page re our 2013–2014 product release dates.
Before we have some face time, however, I have some findings to share. Our customer-centric approach to the new products will necessitate that user testing periods trend upward. The enclosed data should help you effectuate any adjustments to your timeline; let me know ASAP if you require any additional information to facilitate the above.
Before we convene in Fresno, Mr. Reyes and I will agendize any further talking points. Thanks for your help.
Sincerely,
Sylvia Nakamura
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