30e. Mixed constructions with although or because

30eAvoid mixed constructions beginning with although or because.

A word group that begins with although cannot be linked to a word group that begins with but or however. The result is an error called a mixed construction (see also 11a). Similarly, a word group that begins with because cannot be linked to a word group that begins with so or therefore.

If you want to keep although or because, drop the other linking word.

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If you want to keep the other linking word, omit although or because.

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For advice about using commas and semicolons with linking words, see 32a and 34b.