Use Dashes for Breaks in Thought That Are Larger Than Commas Suggest

You can use dashes to add an aside or a comment on the material in the main part of a sentence. Put the aside after one dash at the end of the sentence or between a pair of dashes in the middle of the sentence. Dashes add emphasis to what comes after or between them.

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Try to use no more than two dashes in any sentence. A sentence littered with dashes can leave readers struggling to keep straight which phrases you intended to be the main part of the sentence and which you intended as detours.

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These two pairs of dashes are confusing. The material between them is not crucially important, so two pairs of parentheses would work better.