Practice peer review with Emily Lesk's draft

Read Emily Lesk’s draft, All-Powerful Coke, and think about how you would advise her to revise her work.

  1. Copy and paste into the box below the two paragraphs or sections of the draft that seem strongest to you.

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    Chapter 2 - Practice peer review with Emily Lesk's draft: Copy and paste into the box below the two paragraphs or sections of the draft that seem strongest to you.
  2. What would you tell the writer of this draft you liked most about these sections? Why?

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    uZxg83qH9uNZ3NUqyV8wT7hdxc9/5MQeJeZaOsQNhvI0w6Xk3EOeDQ1B873FE1s7
    Chapter 2 - Practice peer review with Emily Lesk's draft: What would you tell the writer of this draft you liked most about these sections? Why?
  3. What one thing would you suggest that the writer change to improve the draft before submitting it? Why do you recommend this change?

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    uZxg83qH9uNZ3NUqyV8wT7hdxc9/5MQeJeZaOsQNhvI0w6Xk3EOeDQ1B873FE1s7
    Chapter 2 - Practice peer review with Emily Lesk's draft: What one thing would you suggest that the writer change to improve the draft before submitting it? Why do you recommend this change?
  4. Two peer reviewers of this draft offered these comments on her first sentence:

    [Reviewer NL] The opening sentence is a good attention-getter.

    [Reviewer BK] This sentence seems too abrupt.

    What would you recommend that Emily Lesk do in response to these comments?

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    uZxg83qH9uNZ3NUqyV8wT7hdxc9/5MQeJeZaOsQNhvI0w6Xk3EOeDQ1B873FE1s7
    Chapter 2 - Practice peer review with Emily Lesk's draft: Two peer reviewers of this draft offered these comments on her first sentence: [Reviewer NL] The opening sentence is a good attention-getter. [Reviewer BK] This sentence seems too abrupt. What would you recommend that Emily Lesk do in response to these comments?