Exercise 29.5 Revising to make language concrete

Rewrite each of the following sentences to be more specific and concrete.

  1. The entryway of the building was dirty.

    Question

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    The entryway of the building was dirty.
  2. The sounds at dawn are memorable.

    Question

    rd9vU3/uXW+/CuqWl13e4/LHAxNesBU83EWN9OW7vAmnlZbUERMJVWdSQxGN0yYb2GWDDQ==
    The sounds at dawn are memorable.
  3. Our holiday dinner tasted good.

    Question

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    Our holiday dinner tasted good.
  4. The attendant came toward my car.

    Question

    HkpWCKBxrJPPu+HWAX//LOVLUvY9KaGpppNxrmiLJPWpeQ9JU5NbY7TfGRt1YHnfJ8Cnfg==
    The attendant came toward my car.
  5. I woke up.

    Question

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    I woke up.