Revising paragraphs

Writing practice: Revising paragraphs

You must click Submit after each text box on the page to record your work in your instructor's gradebook (if your instructor has assigned this activity). After you have clicked Submit, you may review your work (but you may not revise it) by returning to this page at any time.

Exchange drafts with a classmate and provide feedback to help revise paragraphs. Use the following checklist to help each other develop effective paragraphs:

  • Is the introductory paragraph engaging and interesting?
  • Is each paragraph unified around a main point, and does it contain a clear topic sentence?
  • Is each paragraph sufficiently developed?
  • Is each paragraph the right length? Do any paragraphs need to be divided for easier reading?
  • Is the final paragraph an effective conclusion?

Use the space below to write brief notes to help you revise your paragraphs.

Question

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Use the space below to write brief notes to help you revise your paragraphs.