Clarity

Clarity

Exercises

EXERCISE 1–1 Wordy sentences

EXERCISE 1–2 Wordy sentences

EXERCISE 1–3 Wordy sentences

EXERCISE 1–4 Wordy sentences

EXERCISE 2–1 Identifying active and passive voice

EXERCISE 2–2 Active vs. passive voice

EXERCISE 2–3 Active vs. be verbs

EXERCISE 2–4 Active verbs

EXERCISE 3–1 Identifying parallel structure

EXERCISE 3–2 Parallelism

EXERCISE 3–3 Parallelism

EXERCISE 3–4 Parallelism

EXERCISE 4–1 Needed words

EXERCISE 4–2 Needed words

EXERCISE 4–3 Needed words

EXERCISE 5–1 Shifts: person and number

EXERCISE 5–2 Shifts: tense

EXERCISE 5–3 All shifts

EXERCISE 5–4 All shifts

EXERCISE 5–5 Editing for shifts

EXERCISE 6–1 Mixed constructions

EXERCISE 6–2 Mixed constructions

EXERCISE 6–3 Mixed constructions

EXERCISE 7–1 Misplaced modifiers

EXERCISE 7–2 Misplaced modifiers

EXERCISE 7–3 Misplaced modifiers

EXERCISE 7–4 Dangling modifiers

EXERCISE 7–5 Dangling modifiers

EXERCISE 7–6 Dangling modifiers

EXERCISE 8–1 Combining choppy sentences

EXERCISE 8–2 Using coordination and subordination

EXERCISE 8–3 Using coordination and subordination

EXERCISE 9–1 Jargon

EXERCISE 9–2 Clichés and figures of speech

EXERCISE 9–3 Sexist language

EXERCISE 9–4 Sexist language

Grammar

Grammar

Exercises

EXERCISE 10–1 Subject–verb agreement

EXERCISE 10–2 Subject–verb agreement

EXERCISE 10–3 Subject–verb agreement

EXERCISE 11–1 Irregular verbs

EXERCISE 11–2 Irregular verbs

EXERCISE 11–3 Standard English verb forms

EXERCISE 11–4 Standard English verb forms

EXERCISE 11–5 Verb tense and mood

EXERCISE 11–6 Verb tense and mood

EXERCISE 12–1 Pronoun–antecedent agreement

EXERCISE 12–2 Pronoun–antecedent agreement

EXERCISE 12–3 Pronoun–antecedent agreement

EXERCISE 12–4 Pronoun reference

EXERCISE 12–5 Pronoun reference

EXERCISE 12–6 Pronoun reference

EXERCISE 12–7 Pronoun case (such as I vs. me)

EXERCISE 12–8 Pronoun case (such as I vs. me)

EXERCISE 12–9 Pronoun case (who vs. whom)

EXERCISE 12–10 Pronoun case: review

EXERCISE 12–11 Pronoun case: review

EXERCISE 13–1 Adjectives and adverbs

EXERCISE 13–2 Adjectives and adverbs

EXERCISE 14–1 Sentence fragments

EXERCISE 14–2 Sentence fragments

EXERCISE 14–3 Correcting sentence fragments

EXERCISE 14–4 Correcting sentence fragments

EXERCISE 15–1 Run–on sentences

EXERCISE 15–2 Run–on sentences

EXERCISE 15–3 Revising run–on sentences

EXERCISE 15–4 Revising run–on sentences

EXERCISE 16–1 Verb forms and tenses (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–2 Verb forms with modals (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–3 Verb forms with modals (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–4 Using articles (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–5 Using articles (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–6 Using articles (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–7 Omissions and repetitions (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–8 Sentence structure (for multilingual writers)

EXERCISE 16–9 Prepositions showing time and place (for multilingual writers)

Punctuation

Punctuation

Exercises

EXERCISE 17–1 Commas with independent clauses and introductory elements

EXERCISE 17–2 Commas with nonrestrictive elements

EXERCISE 17–3 Major uses of the comma

EXERCISE 17–4 Major uses of the comma

EXERCISE 17–5 All uses of the comma

EXERCISE 17–6 Misuses of the comma

EXERCISE 17–7 Misuses of the comma

EXERCISE 18–1 The semicolon and the comma

EXERCISE 18–2 The semicolon and the comma

EXERCISE 18–3 The colon, the semicolon, and the comma

EXERCISE 19–1 The apostrophe

EXERCISE 19–2 The apostrophe

EXERCISE 20–1 Quotation marks

EXERCISE 20–2 Quotation marks

EXERCISE 21–1 Other punctuation marks

Mechanics

Mechanics

Exercises

EXERCISE 22–1 Capitalization

EXERCISE 23–1 Abbreviations

EXERCISE 23–2 Numbers

EXERCISE 23–3 Italics

EXERCISE 24–1 Spelling

EXERCISE 24–2 The hyphen

Research

Research

Finding research help

Locating sources using online tools and databases

Sample student writing

Annotated bibliography (MLA): Orlov, “Online Monitoring: A Threat to Employee Privacy in the Wired Workplace: An Annotated Bibliography”

Annotated bibliography (APA): Niemeyer, “Keynesian Policy: Implications for the Current U.S. Economic Crisis”

Exercise

EXERCISE 25–1 Research questions

MLA Papers

MLA Papers

Exercises

EXERCISE 29–1 Thesis statements in MLA papers

EXERCISE 29–2 Thesis statements in MLA papers

EXERCISE 30–1 Avoiding plagiarism in MLA papers

EXERCISE 30–2 Avoiding plagiarism in MLA papers

EXERCISE 30–3 Avoiding plagiarism in MLA papers

EXERCISE 30–4 Avoiding plagiarism in MLA papers

EXERCISE 30–5 Avoiding plagiarism in MLA papers

EXERCISE 30–6 Recognizing common knowledge in MLA papers

EXERCISE 31–1 Integrating sources in MLA papers

EXERCISE 31–2 Integrating sources in MLA papers

EXERCISE 31–3 Integrating sources in MLA papers

EXERCISE 31–4 Integrating sources in MLA papers

EXERCISE 31–5 Integrating sources in MLA papers

EXERCISE 33–1 MLA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 33–2 MLA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 33–3 MLA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 33–4 MLA documentation: identifying elements of sources

EXERCISE 33–5 MLA documentation: works cited

EXERCISE 33–6 MLA documentation: works cited

EXERCISE 33–7 MLA documentation: works cited

EXERCISE 33–8 MLA documentation

Sample student writing

Research paper (MLA): Harba, “What’s for Dinner? Personal Choices vs. Public Health”

Literary analysis (MLA): Larson, “The Transformation of Mrs. Peters: An Analysis of ‘A Jury of Her Peers’”

APA Papers

APA Papers

Exercises

EXERCISE 35–1 Thesis statements in APA papers

EXERCISE 35–2 Thesis statements in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–1 Avoiding plagiarism in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–2 Avoiding plagiarism in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–3 Avoiding plagiarism in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–4 Avoiding plagiarism in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–5 Recognizing common knowledge in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–6 Avoiding plagiarism in APA papers

EXERCISE 36–7 Avoiding plagiarism in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–1 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–2 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–3 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–4 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–5 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–6 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 37–7 Integrating sources in APA papers

EXERCISE 38–1 APA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 38–2 APA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 38–3 APA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 38–4 APA documentation: identifying elements of sources

EXERCISE 38–5 APA documentation: reference list

EXERCISE 38–6 APA documentation: reference list

EXERCISE 38–7 APA documentation: reference list

EXERCISE 38–8 APA documentation

EXERCISE 38–9 APA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 38–10 APA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 38–11 APA documentation: in–text citations

EXERCISE 38–12 APA documentation: reference list

Sample student writing

Literature review (APA): Mirano, “Can Medication Cure Obesity in Children? A Review of the Literature”

Nursing practice paper (APA): Riss, “Acute Lymphoblastic Leukemia and Hypertension in One Client”

Business proposal (APA): Ratajczak, “Proposal to Add a Wellness Program”

{em}Chicago{/em} Papers

Chicago Papers

Exercises

EXERCISE 40–1 Thesis statements in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 40–2 Thesis statements in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–1 Avoiding plagiarism in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–2 Avoiding plagiarism in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–3 Avoiding plagiarism in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–4 Avoiding plagiarism in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–5 Avoiding plagiarism in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–6 Recognizing common knowledge in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 41–7 Avoiding plagiarism in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 42–1 Integrating sources in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 42–2 Integrating sources in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 42–3 Integrating sources in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 42–4 Integrating sources in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 42–5 Integrating sources in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 42–6 Integrating sources in Chicago papers

EXERCISE 43–1 Chicago documentation: identifying elements of sources

EXERCISE 43–2 Chicago documentation: notes

EXERCISE 43–3 Chicago documentation: notes

EXERCISE 43–4 Chicago documentation: notes

EXERCISE 43–5 Chicago documentation: bibliography

EXERCISE 43–6 Chicago documentation: bibliography

EXERCISE 43–7 Chicago documentation: bibliography

EXERCISE 43–8 Chicago documentation

EXERCISE 43–9 Chicago documentation: notes

Sample student writing

Research paper (Chicago): Bishop, “The Massacre at Fort Pillow: Holding Nathan Bedford Forrest Accountable”

CSE Papers

CSE Papers

Sample student writing

Literature review (CSE): Martin, “Hypothermia, the Diving Reflex, and Survival”

Lab report (CSE): Johnson/Arnold, “Distribution Pattern of Dandelion (Taraxacum officinale) on an Abandoned Golf Course”

Additional sample student writing (APA version)

Sample student writing

Research paper (APA; psychology): Conderman, “The Influence of Sex and Learning on Taste Sensitivity”

Analysis (APA; sociology): Elwell, “The Secret of Walmart's Success: A Marxian Analysis”

Reflective essay (APA; education): Gibson, “A Reflection on Service Learning: Working with Eric”

Lab report (APA; psychology): Johnson, “Reaction Times for Detection of Objects in Two Visual Search Tasks”

Report (APA; business): Spencer, “Positively Affecting Employee Motivation”

Administrative report (APA; criminal justice): Thompson, “Crime in Leesburg, Virginia”

Research paper (APA; sociology): Zopf, “African American Males’ Perceptions of Urban and Hip-Hop Styles of Dress”