52c Varying sentence types
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Varying grammatical types
Varying functional types
Varying rhetorical types
In addition to using different lengths and openings, you can use different types of sentences. Sentences can be classified grammatically and functionally (as discussed in Chapter 37) as well as rhetorically.
Varying grammatical types
Grammatically, sentences fall into four categories—simple, compound, complex, and compound-complex—based on the number of independent and dependent clauses they contain (37f). Varying your sentences among these grammatical types can help you create readable, effective prose.
Varying functional types
In terms of function, sentences are declarative (making a statement), interrogative (asking a question), imperative (giving a command), or exclamatory (expressing strong feeling). Most sentences are declarative, but occasionally a command, a question, or an exclamation may be appropriate.
COMMAND
Coal-burning plants undoubtedly harm the environment in various ways; for example, they contribute to acid rain. But consider the alternatives.
QUESTION
Why would sixteen middle-aged people try to backpack thirty-seven miles? At this point, I was not at all sure.
EXCLAMATION
Divorcés! They were everywhere! Sometimes he felt like a new member of an enormous club, the Divorcés of America, that he had never before even heard of.
Varying rhetorical types
By highlighting sentence endings and beginnings, periodic and cumulative sentences can create strong effects.
Periodic sentences
Periodic sentences postpone the main idea (usually in an independent clause) until the very end of the sentence. They are especially useful for creating tension or building toward a climactic, surprise, or inspirational ending.
Even though large tracts of Europe and many old and famous states have fallen or may fall into the grasp of the Gestapo and all the odious apparatus of Nazi rule, we shall not flag or fail.
—WINSTON CHURCHILL
Look at the following sentence and its revision to see how periodic order can provide emphasis:
ORIGINAL SENTENCE
The nations of the world have no alternative but coexistence because another world war would be unwinnable and because total destruction would certainly occur.
REVISED AS A PERIODIC SENTENCE
Because another world war would be unwinnable and because total destruction would certainly occur, the nations of the world have no alternative but coexistence.
Nothing is wrong with the first sentence. But to emphasize the idea in the independent clause—no alternative but coexistence—the writer chose to revise it using the periodic pattern.
Cumulative sentences
Cumulative sentences, which begin with an independent clause and then add details in phrases and in dependent clauses (as does the preceding sentence labeled original), are far more common than periodic sentences. They are useful when you want to provide both immediate understanding of the main idea and a great deal of supporting detail.
I can still see her, a tiny nun with a sharp pink nose, confidently drawing a dead-straight horizontal line like a highway across the blackboard, flourishing her chalk at the end of it, her veil flapping out behind her as she turned back to class.
—KITTY BURNS FLOREY