Identify the words you want to emphasize. If you’ve buried those words in the middle of a sentence, edit the sentence to change their position. The end and the beginning are generally the most emphatic. (53a)
Note any sentences that include a series of words, phrases, or clauses. Arrange the items in the series in climactic order, with the most important item last. (53a)
Underline all verbs, and look to see whether you rely too much on be, do, and have. If so, try to substitute more specific verbs. (53b)