Exercise 4.5 Evaluating conclusions

EXERCISE 4.5

Review Emily Lesk’s draft, and compose an alternative conclusion. Then write a paragraph commenting on the strengths and weaknesses of the two conclusions.

Question

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Review Emily Lesk’s draft, and compose an alternative conclusion. Then write a paragraph commenting on the strengths and weaknesses of the two conclusions.