Student Writing: Final draft (Emily Lesk)

Final draft (Emily Lesk)

Reflect on revision as you read Emily Lesk's final draft, "Red, White, and Everywhere." For comparison, read an early draft of this project here.

  1. What is the biggest difference you notice between Emily Lesk's early draft and this final draft? What is the effect of this change?

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    What is the biggest difference you notice between Emily Lesk's early draft and this final draft? What is the effect of this change?
  2. Write a paragraph giving another writer your most helpful general revision advice. Then reflect on your own advice: Do you follow it yourself? Why or why not?

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    Write a paragraph giving another writer your most helpful general revision advice. Then reflect on your own advice: Do you follow it yourself? Why or why not?