INTEGRATING DESCRIPTION INTO AN ESSAY

Sometimes description alone fulfills the purpose of an essay. In most cases, however, you will use description in essays that mainly rely on a different mode. For instance, in a narrative essay, description helps readers experience events, reconstruct scenes, and visualize action. Although most of your college essays will not be primarily descriptive, you can use description in essays that explain the causes or effects of a phenomenon, compare or contrast animal species, or illustrate defensive behavior in children, for example. (The essay “Speaking Quiché in the Heart of Dixie” later in this chapter uses multiple patterns of development to convey the author’s ideas.)

Here are a few suggestions for combining description effectively with other patterns of development.

  1. Include only relevant details. Whether you describe an event, a person, or a scene, the sensory details you choose should enhance the reader’s understanding of your subject.
  2. Keep the description focused. Select enough details to make your essential points and dominant impression clear. Readers may become impatient if you include too many descriptive details.
  3. Make sure the description fits the essay’s tone and point of view. A personal description, for example, is not appropriate in an essay explaining a technical process.