REVISING YOUR RESEARCH PROJECT

Revise a research paper in two stages. First, focus on the paper as a whole; then consider individual paragraphs and sentences for effectiveness and correctness. If time allows, wait at least a day before rereading your research paper. (For more on revision, see Chapter 10.)

ANALYZING AND REVISING YOUR PAPER AS A WHOLE

Begin by evaluating your paper as a unified piece of writing. Focus on general issues, overall organization, and the key points that support your thesis. Use the flowchart in Figure 24.4 to help you discover the strengths and weaknesses of your research paper as a whole. You might also ask a classmate to review your draft paper by using the questions in the flowchart.

ANALYZING AND REVISING PARAGRAPHS AND SENTENCES

After evaluating your paper as a whole, check each paragraph to be sure that it supports your thesis and integrates sources appropriately. Then check your sentences for correct structure, transitions, and in-text citation format. Use your earlier work with Figure 24.3 to guide your analysis.

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FIGURE 24.4 Flowchart for Revising a Research Project

Research Project in Progress 8

Using the questions in Figure 24.4, revise the first draft of your research paper.