EXERCISE 8.2, Correct Inappropriate Shifts

EXERCISE 8.2, Correct Inappropriate Shifts

EXERCISE 8.2

Correct Inappropriate Shifts

Correct the shifts in person, verb tense, voice, mood, and level of diction in the following paragraph.

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