EXERCISE 2

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EXERCISE 2

Refer to the advice in "Avoid Comma Splices," and rewrite each of the following sentences to eliminate comma splices.

  • Porsche has won the J. D. Power new-model satisfaction award more than any other carmaker, the German company is expected to win next year, too.
  • The federal Bureau of Safety and Environmental Enforcement is developing new regulations for offshore oil and gas operations in the Arctic, these regulations are expected to be ready for review later this year.