CASE 9: Emphasizing Important Information in a Technical Description

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CASE 9: Emphasizing Important Information in a Technical Description

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You and two classmates have been asked to write a technical description of a new 3D printer purchased by the engineering college at your school. Your professor, however, has concerns about the draft you have submitted, and he has outlined those concerns in an email. To read the email, identify passages that warrant improvement, and begin revising the technical description for emphasis and coherence, go here.