Quick Help: Editing for consistency and completeness

• Check every confusing sentence to see whether it has a subject and a predicate. If not, revise as necessary. (49a) If you find both a subject and a predicate and you are still confused, see whether the subject and verb make sense together. If not, revise so that they do. (49b)
• Revise any is when, is where, and the reason . . . is because constructions. (49b)

  

• Check all comparisons for completeness. (49e)