Exercise 4.4 Evaluating thesis and support

EXERCISE 4.4

After rereading your draft, evaluate the revised working thesis. Then evaluate its support in the draft. Identify points that need further support, and list those things you must do to provide that support.

Question

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After rereading your draft, evaluate the revised working thesis. Then evaluate its support in the draft. Identify points that need further support, and list those things you must do to provide that support.