Exercise 30.5 Revising to make language concrete
EXERCISE 30.5
Rewrite each of the following sentences to be more specific and concrete.
The entryway of the building was dirty.
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The entryway of the building was dirty.
The sounds at dawn are memorable.
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The sounds at dawn are memorable.
Our holiday dinner tasted good.
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Our holiday dinner tasted good.
The attendant came toward my car.
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The attendant came toward my car.
I woke up.
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I woke up.