Exercise E2–3 Unnecessary words

EXERCISE E2-3 Unnecessary words Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.)

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  1. Coming to the United States it changed more than my address. It changed the direction of my career.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): Coming to the United States it changed more than my address. It changed the direction of my career.
  2. My life here in Gainesville it’s different from the life that I lived in Bolivia.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): My life here in Gainesville it’s different from the life that I lived in Bolivia.
  3. When I was in Bolivia, I was a chef.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): When I was in Bolivia, I was a chef.
  4. I attended a culinary school, which it was the best in Bolivia, and I was offered the chance to study for a short time in the United States.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): I attended a culinary school, which it was the best in Bolivia, and I was offered the chance to study for a short time in the United States.
  5. When I first came, I met other students who they had different majors.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): When I first came, I met other students who they had different majors.
  6. I learned many things from my roommate, Jin, who was a business major.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): I learned many things from my roommate, Jin, who was a business major.
  7. Jin he helped me realize the importance of having business experience.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): Jin he helped me realize the importance of having business experience.
  8. I learned that although I enjoyed being a chef, but I didn’t want to be a chef without business knowledge.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): I learned that although I enjoyed being a chef, but I didn’t want to be a chef without business knowledge.
  9. I decided to stay a bit longer in the United States, where I could study international business here.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): I decided to stay a bit longer in the United States, where I could study international business here.
  10. Someday I will combine both interests and start my own chain of specialized restaurants, which I hope to build them all over the world.

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    EXERCISE E2-3 - Edit the following sentences by deleting unnecessary words. (In some cases, more than one correction is possible.) If a sentence is correct, write “correct” after it. (For help, see M3-c and M3-d.): Someday I will combine both interests and start my own chain of specialized restaurants, which I hope to build them all over the world.