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Exercise S6-11
Using coordination and subordination
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Combine each set of sentences by subordinating minor ideas or by coordinating ideas of equal importance. The bracketed instructions explain which part of the sentence, if any, should be emphasized. Answers may vary.
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Suggested revision: The American Dust Bowl, which lasted through the 1930s, destroyed crops, cattle, and human lives. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Francis Bicknell Carpenter, Abraham Lincoln’s portrait artist, wrote that Lincoln had “the saddest face” he had “ever attempted to paint.”
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Francis Bicknell Carpenter, who was Abraham Lincoln’s portrait artist, wrote that Lincoln had “the saddest face” he had “ever attempted to paint.” For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Many Americans do not realize that corn, which is found in about 25 percent of all supermarket products, dominates their diet. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Yo-Yo Ma started studying the cello at the age of four, and he began playing before audiences by the age of five.
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Yo-Yo Ma started studying the cello at the age of four; he began playing before audiences by the age of five. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: The Greek scholar Eratosthenes, who lived 1,700 years before Columbus, determined that the earth was round and accurately calculated its diameter. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Born in Virginia, Mateo now considers himself a native Floridian.
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Although he was born in Virginia, Mateo now considers himself a native Floridian. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Clara Barton was always full of energy, and she often described herself as “athletic.” For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Some geologists think that the Yellowstone volcano, which has erupted about every 600,000 years, is due for another explosion. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: The Chinese philosopher Confucius lived about 2,500 years ago.
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Confucius, a Chinese philosopher, lived about 2,500 years ago. For more help, see section S6.
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Suggested revision: Although green tea and black tea look and taste different, they come from the same plant. For more help, see section S6.